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Friday 29 July 2016

My Family Holiday(Joshua's Birthday Party)......>

4 comments:

  1. Good work next time try to re- read your work because there is some mistakes this reminds me of my sisters work.

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  2. okay i worked hard on this work but you are right i have some mistakes thank you for that.

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  3. but can you be more specific, and point out the mistakes and give more kind feedback please anyway, have a nice time blogging..

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  4. Well done baby girl next time re-read your work before posting it.
    Love Mom

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