Angelina @ Papakura High School: The Ageing Man

Tuesday 28 June 2016

The Ageing Man

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Unknown6 July 2016 at 11:48
Hi Angelina. I read your poem and it was amazing. My favorite verse would probably be verse one because you really described him well. Also I liked how you used a lot of adjectives in your work. Keep it up and take care.
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Unknown7 July 2016 at 21:14
O thank-you Helisa you take care as well.
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Malo e lelei my name is Angelina and I am 10 years old and I go to Edmund Hillary primary school. I am a year 6 and I love going to church, my favorite bible verse that the lord says in Ephesians 1:6 children obey your parents in the lord for this is right honor your father and mother which is the first commandment with a promise that it may be well with you and you will enjoy long life on this earth, fathers do not exasperate your children instead bring them up in the instruction and training of the lord. And that is my favorite bible verse. And that is all about obedience.i have learnt that God is omnipresent omniscient and omnipotent i was raise up knowing God.

It was very tough growing up because we had to learn hard have a good report and try to have a good progress in school. My father always said try to do your best and always follow god

In my spare time i like to sing and play with my friends and spend time with my family. My favorite song is fight song. And i would love to be a caring and helpful doctor and i hope to be a servant of the lord so that's me and i hope you have learnt a lot about me. God bless yous

Angelina @ Papakura High School

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Tuesday 28 June 2016

The Ageing Man

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